Body within

Without my eyes

I can not see

Without my lips

I can not speak

Without my ears

I can not hear

Without my hands

I can not feel

 

Without any senses

Just a voice in the wind

No different than the others

The difference comes from with in

 

I see who you are

You see who I am

Without the face

The skin

The eyes

The voice

The looks

 

Now you know me

And I know you

For all you are

In your mind

The soul within

Without a disguise

You are open

As am I

For I can see you

Without my eyes

@all rights reserved by Ashley.M.E.

Reviews

[Wolfwind Words]

This has got to be the most profound and beautiful piece of poetry i've ever read. It tells of the strongest bond that people can share...that of simply knowing... like an invisible thread of connection that says more than any mere sense can share.
I loved the way this piece smoothly brings us to a common cosmic truth.

Fantastic Ashley!
Hugs!
Wolfie

[Jamie S.]

I love your poetry! It reads aloud nicely and your title is perfect. Im feelin ya girl!

Love it. Awesome poem :)

[Dutch Jr.]

Nice imagery. This poem has good feel to it. Nice job.

[Elizabeth]

several places you have "with out" two words... and later without... one word. That mat have been intentional, though.

I loved the thought behind this piece. Well done.

[MiidniightSoul]

Wow, this one is amazing. Very powerful and deep. I love it ^____^

[r]

Wow. I love this; it's really, really good.

[Mauricio Montoya]

I like it,awesome write.

[X]

really getting to know someone is deep, good goin' with this one. excellent write.

[♥(heatherawesome..]

this is really good i love it and you did and awesoeme job

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

A very interesting take... when you talked bout the eyes cause one thing that makes us all unique is how we see things... and it is true that what we see without the eyes is far more important and what is in living color. Wise words in poetic form.