what's more funny then a kitten and a dog

ok so i was watching my kitten and dog. I had to write it

Watch her as she wiggles her furry long gray fur, her butt, her tailing wagging, up in the air. Her head low, watching him closely. Her head between her front paws as she waits. There he was, his tail wagging, larger then her body. She wanted it. He just lay there not noticing she was there. Then she waited, finally memorizing the wagging of his tail, then she jumped, her pointed thin claws grabbing his tail. He jumped, swirling around, now she bit his tail.

 

Nothings more funny then a cat biting a dogs tail.

 

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Author's Note

I had too

Reviews

[nono]

haha that is really funny. So cute and very good description....and not to mention soooo cute!

[Norma M Sutton]

Cute.

Watch her as she wiggles her furry long gray her but, her tailing wagging, up in the air(is it her fur that is long and gray or her body or her tail?). Her head low, watching him closely. Her head between her front paws as she waited(waits). There he was, his tail wagging(,) larger then her body. She wanted it. He just laid(lay) there not noticing she was there. Then(I think you can leave out Then) she waited, finally memorizing the wagging of his tail(, then?) she jumped(,) her paled(pointed?) thin claws grabbing his tail. He jumped, swirling around, now she bit his tail.



Nothings more funny then a cat biting a dogs tail.

[Daydreamer54]

This really was cute and funny! Great write and the picture is cute btw and it goes well with the short story! :)

[melissa]

very cute:)

[The_Dreamer]

Yes, it is the events like these that often go unnoticed. Yet, it is a very fun thing to watch. Great observation, and good work!

[Rose Tyler]

This is cute. And I agree, nothing is funnier than a little kitten biting a dog's tail that is larger than it's own body.