Better

The problem with you wasn't that

you left

I wanted you to walk away.

I couldn't.

 

The problem with you wasn't that

I was made

to be together with you. 

I wasn't.

 

The problem with you wasn't that I could

never do better

than you.

I had before and will

again.

 

The difference with you was that I knew

there was a problem.

With you. 

I didn't care.

That was the problem.

With me.

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Michael (Letters and Li..]

I liked this poem a lot. The flow and tempo and rhythm was very interesting. The way it unfolded was a nice touch, creating many different feels throughout. Thank you for sharing! :)