where are you?

where are you?

A Poem by love~letters~!
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its not exactly a poem but it just came to mind sooo here ya go! <3

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miss you to much, i love you, i need you, i want you, will you come and find me?  Im lost i cant find myself, when i was with you last, you found me , we diparted and i cant see you, please come find me and the love we use to have! i miss you, you said you would come back, where are you now? i really really need you come find me please?  WHERE ARE YOU?

© 2012 love~letters~!


Author's Note

love~letters~!
please ignore the grammar and spelling mistakes. i just wanna know what you guys think. its not really a poem haha i dont know what to call it really enjoy!!!!

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I think it could be a poem if you just put each phrase on a line. You could try it.

diparted to departed (I know you said ignore, but it really does make a difference)

I think this is sad. I like the feelings you put into it - the desperation. Good job. Keep writing.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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I think it could be a poem if you just put each phrase on a line. You could try it.

diparted to departed (I know you said ignore, but it really does make a difference)

I think this is sad. I like the feelings you put into it - the desperation. Good job. Keep writing.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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love~letters~!
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i love to write poems mostly about love, i don`t have great spelling, and i write mostly at night beacuse thats the times i mostly get inspered more..

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