i hate you

words are not enough to describe how much i hate you, ever since you entered my life i have been sad and blue.  

with your malicious plan you took all of my friends away from me.

i have no one else but hatred for you in my heart because of you.

i promise to bring magic back into my life once again.

i will not let you ruin it, or cause pain to it anymore.  

my life is only mine, and you destroying it for me is not your place.

i will fight you out of my heart, till the day your out of my sight.

Author's Note

please ignore the grammar problems please if there are any. please tell me what you think of it. And yes it is kinda mean but its something that came to mind.

Reviews

[SheActsLikeSummer]

I was doing this just the other day. Though it was more of a 'I hate her. I hate her.' continuously repeated. I just find it a good way to vent, you know? Anyway, I really enjoyed this and love the way you formatted it. Made things stand out a lot more.

[Brittany]

Great passion in this. Again I like your words, but you need to put them in lines to make it a poem and not prose. I like the last line the best.

[Taylor]

That is mean but true good job