i want you to hear me

i want you to hear me,

i want you to hear not only me but my body to,

i want you to hear my heart whisper i love you,

i want you to hear the gentile kisses on your lips say i care,

i want you to hear my hugs say im hear for you,

i want you to hear my touch say forever and always,

i want you to hear our hands talking to echother when they hold one another,

i want you to hear the sound the spark makes when our fingurs touch,

i want you to hear my heart whisper,

i love you

Author's Note

please ignore the grammar problems i want to know what you think!

Reviews

[Brittany]

Oh now, I really love this one. Great work.

I would move 'not only me but my body to' to it's own line
gentile - gentle
im hear - i'm here
echother - each other
fingurs - fingers

[SheActsLikeSummer]

This was really touching. I love the way you repeated the last line. (3rd and last) It was just really good, filled with emotion. Great job.

[Distant horizons]

Great emotion filled write.

[Erin]

Yes, aside from the spelling and grammar problems (easily fixed), I like it. It's really well written :)