My Neighbour Molly

My Neighbour Molly

A Poem by Dagger Jones
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Autism doesn't need to be a dark place, quite the opposite at times.

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Molly today you cast a smile across my face

It was a grin from ear to ear

I cant thank you enough molly

Your sweetness is so clear

 

Molly dont let them call you simple

For more complex you could not be

I cant thank you enough Molly

In my heart you've set me free

 

Don't you know that when the sun it shines

Its shining straight through you

Sometimes I wish I saw your world

And the places your thoughts take you too

 

Molly inside you there lyes no hate

This is a gift god gave to you

I wish sometimes I saw your world

And the place your thoughts take you too

 

Is it a world of, Im not sure

Or is it all fun like you portray

Sometimes I so wish that you could tell

But I think Id like it either way

 

Molly you are a gift ....

© 2008 Dagger Jones


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Molly sounds like a nice person.. i would love a neigfhbor like her.
Your writing makes me feel as if i know her , or how she might be .
Good rhythm and just enough rhyme.
I love the last line ..Molly you are a gift.. if more people could be like Molly
our world would be a better place .. like this one very much..
Chloe
xoxo


Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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this is a wonderful poem, i really enjoyed reading it!! you are such a good writer and i am glad to have been able to read your work and i look forward to reading more!
laceyjane

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Molly sounds like a nice person.. i would love a neigfhbor like her.
Your writing makes me feel as if i know her , or how she might be .
Good rhythm and just enough rhyme.
I love the last line ..Molly you are a gift.. if more people could be like Molly
our world would be a better place .. like this one very much..
Chloe
xoxo


Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Dagger Jones
Dagger Jones

deep river, HI, Australia



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During this wasted life o mine, I seen and done (like most others) an array of beautiful, wierd, funny, creepy, lovely things, hmm, and thats where most of my poems might relate. As to me, im a lil no.. more..

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