moments

its a poem about random situations that happen in ones life to be remembered as that moment !!!!

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

distance between my heart and soul

illusions so deep,

she tried to explain how deep it is

by the moments of inertia

but it wasnt the right time.

 

 

when my thoughts were

expunged i knew it was the right moment,

like crying out in the rain

you ignored me but i needed you

that moment.

atheist movement on time

this is my moment with you.

 

 

like a savant i wish i`d have all your answers

but at the moment you can have my emotions,

like bliss ''please'' lets bless and anger our enemies

for taking the decision to seat next to you was right for

this moment .

 

 

apnea is what occured when you smiled

but

waswaas disturbed the pleasure

of the final moment.

Reviews

[Bare trees]

You speak with a lot of emotion in this and your sorrow is evident. In the beginning you speak ABOUT her (she tried to explain how deep it is). Then you switch to talking TO her
(you ignored me but i needed you). It would be best to stick to one form or the other so you do not confuse the reader.

(you tried to explain how deep it is)

[Divinity Sleeps in This]

1. like a savant i wish i`d have all your answers

Oh I like your choice of vocab, you also haev a lot of emotional depth! Good stuff!