at her site

its a poem talking about visions one gets when the fall in love

As i stare to the sky like my nose is bleeding

im in forest.

because all i could feel was butterflies in my tummy

and i thought it was extinction.

see at that time words couldnt be spoken

because at her sight i felt under my skin .

my brown eyes should tell her

how much i feel about her because the english

vocabulary cannot

 

 

like the burning tree of life that moses saw

i feel like taking off my shoes

take all the bad in me .

because she should live in a clean heart

she deserves as much as possible.

like honey to sooth her naturally looking skin

not to mention her smile thats says ``its okay``.

 

 

like a crossword puzzle life confuses

everyone

even though we know the answers are on the next page.

whats life without introspection.

which brings me to her 

whats my future without you or should i invest in funeral services

because im as good as dead.

like lionel dont hang up on me but lets connect

because the feeling is so intense.

i can almost feel you breath,  please can i breath with you ?

 

 

as it dawns , my heart longs for that final smile

that will explode our love

whats meant to be should be together like

roses and violets, music and beats, love and happiness

jay and beyonce, you and me  

once again i feel pregnant because i carry you in my heart

all day long in my heart!!

Author's Note

this is my first poem on this site so id really like comments on how to improve my standards

Reviews

[Kristian Marion]

Awesome imagery in this poem. Amazing work of art.

[butterfly]

amazingly awsome

[Renée]

Your poem is beautiful..carried my breath away..

[AK]

Amazing! Your use of adjectives is baffling. I loved your style of writing and thanks for the review!

[Graggz]

thank you dear

[closed..acct]

Deep powerful write, i think it looks fine the way it is.
This tugs on the heart, Well expressed.