If i told you

If i told you

A Poem by Graggz

If i told you
i would be your cloud on your blue skies,
your favorite channel,
if i told you id be your tissue to wipe away your
running mascara and dry your tears.
pleasure you with nuclei bombs of orgasms
with sensational moments indulging your sensations
if i told you i love you.
if i told you i don't mind cos i don't matter anymore,
if i told you i wanna take off and let the landscape
divert the priorities.
if i  asked you what you brought
into thee`s life other than just the relationship status.
wheres the shadow & support behind this great man
if only i could warn you and step up the game
if i told you someone`s slowly taking charge on your territory
but your ill passion makes me don't mind the change
the hungry lions have arrived and my name is on the to do list
if i told you .

© 2015 Graggz


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A somehow simply but so candidly written piece, mingling simple words with more expressive ones, that's a lovely and good way to write. I found many lovable lines.

Posted 8 Years Ago


i was really attracted by the title ..
nice piece of work my friend

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Graggz
Graggz

durban, christain, South Africa



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