Twenty three

Aspiring drops of curiosity
with inches of consciousness,
falling deep into visible thoughts like a lucid dream
is it a lucid dream. ?


Life crumbles into memories
that fade away with confused lessons
as migraines attack upon attempt to learn from mistakes .
burning sensation from rubbing the genie lamp
 as he counts me down to my second wish,
bliss
money
love.


Confused to the limit
as the answer is procastinate.
to much wasted tears left with a prayer
feeling specious yet special
uncertainty making life uncertain
at twenty three it made sense but how true is it
at twenty three.


 Big city lights
 thick atmosphere's
lungs turning to "chu chu trains"
 fast as losing virginity
the concept of soberness slowly fades with each shot of tequila
as i amaze at the confusions twenty three invited.
moments changing as fast as i realize these hands have been through a lot at twenty three.


love penetrates straight from the soul of the bones
as her cleavage outshines the neon light bulb in the room
sounding louder than a piano as i play around her thighs hitting those high notes  climaxing to every deep thrust
thrusting deeper with my manhood succeeding the coitus all  for reason & closure
as  the second passes to live another moment
at twenty three.

Reviews

[Leif+Henry]

I've probably read about 10 of these "emotional poems." This one is by far the best.

[Graggz]

thank you very much , its appreciated