Serenity for always

souls talking

 

Serenity for always

I am soul, what is soul?

Soul is life, life is soul

Its memories

Desire for last day

Doing for today

Imagine for tomorrow

 

What is trust?

Trust on self

What is self?

I am self your self

What I am? What are you?

I am you, your me

What are we?

We are souls!

We are searching

For soul happy

its target!

serenity for always 

Reviews

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

Your serenity for always is a pleasure for the readers soul. Amazing!

[After From 6 Years]

thank you Sky

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

Welcome Friend :)

[Cy!]

Beautiful. This sound realistic, very creative. :)

[After From 6 Years]

wow. thanks so much. i appreciate it. but you know i asked you for friend relation.
thanks for your time. hope to be friend

[Anindita Janhabee]

at first, very funny..
then, quite worth reading and finally, understandable...
''souls talking to each other'', never knew will be so much beautiful..
thanks for the read request,
keep it up!!!
Anindita

[After From 6 Years]

as soon we will get existence in soul world!
thanks for review. but you need to change your think!
''souls talking to each other'', never knew will be so much beautiful..

[Anindita Janhabee]

I meant to say that the talks of the souls in this poem was very beautiful and funny at the same time, which I never thought or expected... well written...

[After From 6 Years]

its really kind review!
thanks

[iamshadowine]

this is really good! keep writing

[Julia]

Interesting structure. I enjoyed the quick simple Q&A dynamic of the piece.

[After From 6 Years]

thanks you so much!

[Coyote Poetry]

I liked the questions leading to perfect ending. Life is simple. Find something to do you enjoy. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[After From 6 Years]

thanks. poems writing can help me in enjoy!

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome.