Life

I wrote this poem when I was 18 and it was published in a book called 'Mixed Emotions'. It is very simple and explains what I thought of life when I was at a very young age. My poetry and words have grown more since then, but for 18, I think I did pretty

Life is a rollercoaster that no one can control.

We're always trying to be happy and find,

What's missing in our souls.

Because people are so nasty, it changes who we are.

But everyday is new and we can have a fresh start.

Whenever you feel alone, remember you are not.

Someone out there cares, your always in their thoughts.

As for all the happiness which life will always bring.

Enjoy every moment, appreciate every little thing.

The most wonderful thing in life,

Would have to be love.

It takes away our sorrows and helps when life gets tough.

No matter what life throws at you, always remain strong.

As long as you have love, nothing will go far wrong.

Author's Note

I was 18, now 21. What do you think??

Reviews

[Sr.phil]

nice write. really nice.

[Carrie L. Hale]

I like it! I wish I'd been that positive when I was eighteen! I think it's very sweet, and just what I needed to read today! I also really like the rhyme, it's sorta, quirky, but it completely works. Doesn't feel forced, which is a plus :). Thank you for sharing this!