Daniel and Antonniette

a miniscule poem of beauty vs manhood

Poem: Daniel and Antoniette 

 

 

1809 Black Plague December  

July 2023. 

 

 

She is so beautiful 

Yet yielding in his touch. 

Reviews

[Dennis Wolf]

Painstakingly simple(short), but sufficient and sweet.

The shorter works, as I understand, are more difficult to get right.. So congratulations on this one.

[1809 Black Plague December]

Thank you! Dennis Wolf. I ah, am right now, in the progress of writing the novel. Will post it tonight. At midnight surely like Cinderella LOL; it is about the poem how a woman is not always the beauty but a man can entail it too; :) ---Maynard

[Dennis Wolf]

Well, I for one rather detest stereotypical views of just about everything.. Sure women are beautiful, and some ridiculously so, but if everyone always wrote about that.. I guess we'd die of boredom. Haha

I'll be looking forward to your novel.
Cheers.

[1809 Black Plague December]

thank you so much, Dennis Wolf, it's true; I remember the Bible. Adam was born. But he needed something different. He wanted someone like him, but different. God, took his left rib and woman begot. Eve. :)

[Dennis Wolf]

Yep, but he screwed up the blueprints somewhere with Adam, maybe left him in the oven too long haha, and then, later, the snake got in the mix.. Grrrrrr I hate snakes.. I mean those reptilian creatures.

Aaaand so, with the oldest trick in the book our pitiful species was doomed.. By a talking disgusting creature...

I mean, what gives God..? Why didn't you make at least one of them smarter? Just a wee bit? 🤣 Hahaha

[1809 Black Plague December]

you're so funny. LOL. Snakes? okay, LOL
please forgive me, I find it hilarious, it's just that I find girls cute; I never understand it; smart? not smart; oh just come here little one, LOL I'll do your make up LOL

[Dennis Wolf]

Hahaha yeah, well suppose the make up was more important haha