Record Player

Introduction Poem to A Thousand Pages

Record Player

1809 Black Plague December

 

 

 

 

 

 

I fell into you.  Fall me once.

Fall me twice.   There is no time for Paradise.

 

The Record player is on.  I laugh and twist to your dishonest words.

 

Claim! Claim!

 

Call me once.  Calm me twice.  Take me to your Paradise.

Reviews

[Matthew Kult]

Maybe you will not want the paradise that is offered by said person.

Good read.

With love,

Matthew

[1809 Black Plague December]

thank you so much Matthew Kult. :)

[nadia dmitri]

"...twist to your dishonest words" is a great line! i also like the formatting, great job :)

[1809 Black Plague December]

Thank you so much Nadia Dmitri,

[Keagen Cole]

Personally, I don't understand it in a literal sense, but it definitely has accurate connections to the overall worldview.

[1809 Black Plague December]

thank you,
As I said, before it is about Euphoriia,
Delusional moment dancing to a record player,
and it is about I.

[Keagen Cole]

Good to know.

[The_Ancient_Rock]

Ah yes... dishonest words...

We do lack a lot of honesty in this world...

I wonder if it has something to do...

With all the gad damn Bleach!!!

Just wondering...

Interesting piece... ;)

[1809 Black Plague December]

thank you The_Ancient_Rock.
Bleach, I find it funny.

[The_Ancient_Rock]

As do I...

Very amusing indeed...

[Alla Antsis]

" I laugh and twist to your dishonest words" Love it - a true dance

[1809 Black Plague December]

thank you so much dear,
I hope you are having a great morning

[willweb]

I like the structure of this and the picture it creates in my mind. The record player playing your dishonest words. This feels like a song.

[1809 Black Plague December]

thank you so much Willweb.
It is part of a song, I wrote,
part poem-part song.

[duff]

Records playing so we dance into old times. A sound of harmony. Your arms held me in paradise. Nice work.

[1809 Black Plague December]

Thank you so much Duff, yes, a good line,

[Coyote Poetry]

Like a song, the words danced. I liked the energy of the words. Accepting what was giving without complaining. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[1809 Black Plague December]

yes, I saw a video of a woman in Italy,
I find myself in her.
I love to Dance, in Euphoria, Delusional,
It is based on me

[jacob erin-cilberto]

the record is playing...I am remembering vinyl, 45's of which I had so many...
I loved the flipsides...I found time to play them twice but that paradise?
High school love rarely leads us there.
j.

[1809 Black Plague December]

hellos J, yeah, I dig it, love the two sides, from
the 1980's. LOL I grief at the thought of losing, what is now considered old, or centuries but it were just yesterday,. Ha ha!

[John the Baptist]

Has the sound of one who knows he's being taken for a ride and doesn't care. Enjoy it.

[1809 Black Plague December]

Yes dear, it is a Euphoria,
a Delusional ride,
thank you for reading my work,