BaywitchA Story by Fernando91Failed writer Raymond Baker returns to his fathers hometown of Baywitch to pursue a simple life. Or so he thought. His past returns to stalk him in this psycological thriller.EPILOGUE HOW DID
THIS HAPPEN TO ME? Baywitch
mountains was my summer retreat. It was where my father grew up. It was a
typical rural zone, simple folk, small festivals, the raising of farm animals
and the threat of the superficiality and rottenness of a metropolis was very far away. Perhaps this is the main
reason I enjoyed visiting this old rural town. The fact that I could get away
from all the problems in my real life, my divorce, my dull career, and the
woman who threatened to be the next parasite in my life. I had to do
something.And maybe deciding to stay a year in Baywich mountains was exactly
what I needed to get back on my feet. Or so I thought. Many times we believe
that leaving behind the people and places where weve done wrong, is a chance
for a fresh beginning, a time of rebirth, where we can effectively change our
fates, without the lingering past to deal with. Unfortunatley, I discovered in
a very painful way myself, two years ago in the lonely mountains of Baywitch,
that the ghosts of our past and the darkness that follows always has a way of
catching up. And sometimes, some take it up to themselves, to make sure you
deal with these demons. My mind
races with thoughts of despair and fear everytime I remember what happened in
those mountains. My daughter, a brilliant 19 year old student of psychology at
NYU suggested I write my experiences in the third person, to detach the
negative emotions and memories from my mind. Ive read my story countless times,
and not once can I read it without picturing myself again in that dreaded place.
Who knows. Maybe there was a scientific explination for everything I saw. Ill
let you be the judge of that. Even if it was a dilussion, its intensity burnes
into my brain and left a scar like a hot iron poker. It branded me. It changed me. Baywitch mountains, baptized
me in the flames of insanity, something I will not soon forget. I The beige
Toyota truck headed south down the long, wet highway. The surrounding green
woods and the classic preacher on the AM radio gave Raymond Baker the solace he
always sought in the city. He had decided to move, leave everything in his
former life, and to keep things simple, by returning to the rural town of
Baywitch, a charming little village, which was the home of his father in his
youth, and had been his summer retreat for the past 15 years. Raymonds thoughts
of the simple life had him excited beyond any doubt. He had already bought an
old terrain not 25 km away form his grandfathers house, and he had the good
fortune of having invested in his grandfathers business for the past two years,
insuring he would have income if ever he was to engage his crazy but liberating
plan. And it was that moment. He had left
a week prior from New York where he had faced a criminal trial for supposed
plagiarism in his work as a short story author. The thing that plagued him most
was that he had copied a few ideas, and nonetheless from one of his ex
girlfriends, Molly Pine. Molly and he had collaborated in many a story, both of
them having a natural knack for writing from personal experiences and fleshing
out characters in a way that brought them to life of f the page. They had both
won countless awards, and had bought a apartment in the upper east side. He
remembered the romantic times, the evenings full of talk of history, politics,
wine and their love of classic literature. Raymond now focused on the road. He
had decided to leave behind those memories, and the lawsuit and the loss of
half of his fortune made him remember that if he were in Mollys position he would’ve cut her some slack.
Of course,
thought Raymond, when one is a middle aged man and everything in your life goes
to hell, you see what your wife is made of. And unfortunately for Raymond, his
now ex wife Ashley was made for seducing one of the best divorce attornies in
New York. So Raymond continued to drive, and force himself into thoughts of
raising his animals, working the land, and meeting with the locals, and did his
best to leave behind the thought of Molly, his b***h of an ex wife, and his
teenage daughter, who was too smart for her own good. No one cared about dad
anymore. If anyone of them would have told him to stay he would’ve. But no one
did. And Raymond realized, as he drove throught the now misty road down a never
ending cornucopia of trees, that he was at the exact same place in his life
when his father returned to Baywitch. No one cared. The prodigal son of
Baywitch, he thought to himself, was forced to return where no one could see
him because the real world doesn’t give a s**t about him anymore. It didn’t suit
him just fine, as he led others to believe, but this plan to leave everything
behind was the next best thing. II Raymond
arrived in the small locality of Markers point, a small town much like
Baywitch, but with a gas station, two diners, and a mcdonalds. He remembered
that when he was a small boy, he used to head over to Rudys diner, with his
father, after coming form a long exhausting, but fun trip to Baywitch lake for
fishing lessons. The clouds and grey mist seemed only to dissolve when the sun
made its brief and final appearance of the afternoon. The sunset in Markers
Point seemed to give it a dozey feel, and the simple folk he saw entering and
exiting the small stores had easygoing expressions. If he remembered correctly,
it would be a little more than 2 hours from this small town to reach his the
small cottage in his piece of land, so Raymond decided it was best to rest up
at a local motel, since he had been exhausted from the entire day of driving. Raymond Baker drove until he saw it. Rudys.
The old diner that has home to a great deal of his precious memories. He felt the
nostalgia take over him, and he drove into the worn down gravel filled parking
lot. The majority of vehicles were tow trucks, 4x4 all terrain Toyotas and a
host of Harley Davidson motorcycles. It seemed that a few bikers had stepped in
to grab a bite. Raymond hoped they didn’t drink, so as to cause a riot inside
the homely diner. When Raymond entered, he saw few of what he remembered. The
tables looked unkept and dirty, the dim lights and the unfriendly faces of the
waitresses gave the place a general feel of unwelcome. Still, he thought to
himself that he could use a cup of coffee, and a place to gather his thoughts.
A middle aged woman with a nametag in a most dull font came to his table, with
her name written on it. CINDY. ´Whatll it be kid?´, asked the woman. Her face
was so excessevley drawn in make up that he couldn’t help but imagine what she
would look like if she were to sweat. ´A cup of coffe would be good. Hey, can I
ask you a question?you know any good motels I could stay at for tonight?you
know, a place without that many roaches?´. Cindy the waitress stared back at
him, unamused. ´Your best bet would be Ol lincolns motel. He has the best. Or
so they say´. Raymond smiled at her, but it seemed a herculean task to make
this woman change her cold manner. Raymond looked around the diner. He saw the
bikers, drinking beer, talking in a polite, sound tone to the now apparent
owner of Rudys. He was nothing like the kind old man who used to give him free
ice cream as a child. It was a rather angry looking man, whos large red nose
and uncouth manner gave the impression he had a drinking problem. Still, his
cold reception in Markers point didn’t bring his spirits down, and he felt he
just needed a cup of coffee. Raymond continued to look around. Before he
had noticed, fifteen minutes had passed. Jesus, what s****y service, he thought
to himself. Across from his table, sat a perturbed looking man, with long
strides of loose black hair, baby blue eyes, protruding ears and a skinny neck.
He stared shamlessly at Raymond in a way that began to make him uncomfortable.
The man stood up, and walked over to his table. ´Hi´, said the man anxiously,
his face with a nervous expression . ´Can I sit down?´. Raymond wasn’t bothered
by the man now that he had at least had the decency to introduce himself and
not just stare. Perhaps this crazy looking individual was the only one left
with manners in the whole town. ´Im Craig, Craig Bartlett. My dad owns the
supermarket in Baywitch just a couple hours down the road’.´ Yeah yeah, I know
the place, that’s where Im headed right now´, replied Raymond, introducing
himself and shaking his hand. It was clampy and unpleasant. ´I- I think I know
you sir. You came here a long time ago, you look about the same, ya haven’t
changed a bit. I was a kid though, I probably looked a lot different than I do
now’. Raymond looked at the man puzzled. ´I think you got the wrong guy buddy, I mean, I dunno if you’ve noticed, but you look about the same age as me, if not more, no offense´. Craig stared back at him, dumbfounded. ´But uh, hey maybe it was my dad, he came here when I was leaving for college. I never saw him again, so, maybe he lived here for a couple of years?everyone says im almost identical’. ´Your, you’re his son?yeah, that must be it. Listen, I know this is gonna sound crazy, and your probably gonna wanna punch me or something, but uh, I got something to tell you.’ Raymond began to tire of this stranger. ´This place, this place does things to people, bad things. I- I found the cave, I found it and I discovered what it was, and everybody knows it but nobody says anything. And they hide you. They hide you so You don’t tell anyone’. Craig whispered as he said these words. Something entered his eyes, he was frightened beyond anything Raymond had seen recently. Craig Bartlett must have some sort of medical condition. Still, for fear of a scene, he humored him. ´So if they hid you, why
are you here?why are you telling me this?´, said Raymond, with a smile on his
face. Craigs face began to look disappointed, like a child when his favorite
candy is taken away.´Please mister, you don’t understand, I can tell because
people like us, people with something dark inside us, were the ones that are
envied. Please sir, pay attention, don’t listen to the one with a thousand
voices, or the puddles happiness or any of that stuff that it shows you to make
you…like me..’. Craig began to bother
Raymond heavily now. ´Ya know Craig, your not making a lot of sense right now,
and your making me uncomfortable. Just, leave me alone friend, lets not make a
big scandal out of it.’Cindy the inpolite waitress returned with Raymonds
coffee, and it poured it into his cup. ´Jeez missy I thought this place would
work quicker without as much people. How many are there in this town, like 10 people?´.
Raymond realized the rudeness of his words as they escaped his mouth. ´Hey Im
sorry Cindy. Theres just a lot goin on, and my friend Craig who is just leaving
kinda made me uneasy.’ ´Yeah he does that to people. Cmon Craig move it. Let
the gentleman enjoy his coffee’. She smirked. Raymonds first thought was that
she probably spit into it. But at this point, he seemed not to care, and
decided to take his chances. After
finishing what seemed like liquid mud, Raymond stood and headed over to speak
to the owner of Rudys, the old, bitter man amongst the bikers. He preferred the guidance of the
owner, since he was more prone to know of close accomodations, and he was at
least less pissed off at the out of towner. Raymond approached the counter and
introduced himself. ´Hello sir, hi, um,my names Raymond, im just passing by, I
wanted to ask if you know any good places where I can stay, like a motel or something.
Something with the least number of roaches possible’. The balding, middle aged man looked at him as
if Raymond had slapped him in the face. ´Im trying to have a conversation here,Sir. Were simple folk around here, and I
dunno how they do it in the big city, but around here, we don’t interrupt
conversations just for directions´. The people in this diner seemed hellbent on
annoying him. ´Im sorry. Ill just go. Didn’t realize the
hospitality in small towns was just an urban myth.’ Raymond felt pleased with
himself. Until he looked back and saw all the bikers stand up and face him,
some pulling chains and other dangerous objects from their pockets. Everyone
else in the diner stopped talking, and the old jukebox playing old country
music seemed to stop, just like an old western.
´Listen sir, Ill be on my way, don’t want any trouble´. The owner
smirked and raised his hand. ‘Boys boys, is that how we treat a guest in this
here diner?where are my manners, Im sorry. Sometimes the drink gets the best of
me. Names Carl Reagan.´ Carl proceeded to shake Raymonds hand.
´Accomadations?of course boy, youll do fine at Kips. Its fifteen minutes down
the road, it’s the highest class place around. But spose a fellow like yourself
can afford it.´ Raymond knew that Carl was being insincere, perfunctory at its
finest. But he dared not to defy his help, since he didn’t want nor need a
beating by a motorcycle gang. ´Thanks. Im sorry we got off to a bad start. Ill
be off now.´ Carl walked away quickly, and noticed Craig and Cindy the waitress
were both gawking at the scene. Craig, with a look of awe and Cindy, with a
scowl. Raymond bolted out of the old diner and got into his car. Carl Reagan
had probably already put the call in at Kips, and Raymond didn’t want to risk
not going and then running into the bikers. All he knew was, he didn’t much
like Rudys anymore. III Darkness
fell in the wilderness, the loud chirps of the insects and scurrying of the
tiny mamals abroad gave life to the blanket of shadows that had fallen. The moon
was bright in the sky, and its beacon shined through the old, run down windows
of Kips motel, and into the plain, old room that was now inhabited by a one
Raymond Baker. He was greeted by a burly
old man, a scruffy white beard covered his face, and the flannel shirt and the
hospitable attitude painted the perfect portrait of the stereotypical old
lumberjack. His name was Dean Garden. He owned Kips and it seemed he had not
had a guest in a very long time. The old motel was a practical joke by Carl Reagan,
half of the power didn’t work, and the rooms with power were uninhabitabledue
to broken pipes and vandals that had had their way with the place. Instead,
Raymond had to settle for the back cabins. They were a homely place, their only
defect being the general abandoned feeling about them. Most couples and
tourists who passed by avoided the place, out of fear of being robbed and its
close proximity to the woods, since Markers Point and Baywitch had an
unfortunate reputation of bear attacks. And then of course, there was the fact that
the only source of light was that of candles. Dean offered Raymond a large
discount and a complementary breakfast on the house, but he was already paying
a ridiculously low fee, he didn’t want to privy the simple old man of money
just because he didn’t get light. Besides, a back to basics approach to life
was exactly what Raymond was looking for in this new chapter in his life. ´Now
remember, any pranksters try to give ya any trouble, just give a blow on this
here whistle. If you here sounds in the night, don’t worry, it aint a Hollywood
axe murderer, just animals. And if ya here gunfire, which, I assure you, I
highly doubt ya will, its just me scarin off bears or those godamn kids. Ya
sure ya don’t want that breakfast tomorrow?I really feel bad ya wont be able to
stay in one of my nicer rooms, most guests usually love stayin at Kips!’. The
old man scaring off bears and juvenile delinquents with a shotgun close to his
room wasn’t a reassuring thought.But he appreciated the sentiment. ´Thanks
Dean, but Im okay. You sleep tight now.’ Mr.Garden made an approving gesture
with his head, and left, leaving Raymond to his privacy. A small useless TV and
a plain bed, with an old nightstand were all that adorned his room. The floor
was made up of a cheap green carpet, and the walls had a plain yellowish wall
paper. The room seemed like it was pulled out of one of Kemmons Wilsons first
roadside motels. Raymond
stripped inside the warmth of the bed covers, daring not to change standing up because
of the roaches he had noticed in the dim lighting of the candles. He was left
wearing his boxers, staring into the blank roof of the old room. He closed his
eyes, wishing to just fall asleep. Ten minutes passed. Twenty minutes passed.
Nothing. Nothing. He was as tired as
hell, but he still couldn’t fall asleep. His mind still troubled him with the
events of the day. He remembered the last fight he had with his wife. Well his
ex-wife now. The look of disappointment in his daughters eyes. When Molly cried
when she realized he had betrayed her. Was nothing in his life real anymore?
Raymonds face now wore a three day stubble, his greyish eyes and chiseled
features hid his age fairly well. He was fit for forty, training on his own
mainly via pushups and pullups as his daily routine, followed by a good cup of
black coffee, and writing at least two pages of his newest project. He had
stopped doing the latter for three weeks now. The candles were now put out.
Raymond couldn’t stand not getting his rest. He listened to the slight breezes
of wind outside, reminding him of the luck he had to be lying down, warm in a
bed. At least he had this. Then, to Raymonds amazement, the winds mood swifted
from restless and bitter to angry and out of control. He felt as if the whole
cabin might fall down. The television shook furiously, falling to the ground
and breaking into pieces. The now extinct candles tumbled aggresivley to the
floor, and the window sill seemed to rattle in a furious way. The wooshing of
the wind made the night seem howling with laughter, as if overjoyed by some
sinister joke. Then it stopped. Raymonds logical mind tried to find an answer,
unsuccessfully to as what might’ve caused the phenomenon. He came to no logical
conclusion. It could not have been the wind alone. Perhaps an earthquake? There
it was. It was an earth quake. Raymond stood up quickly, and changed into his
blue jeans as quickly a possible. Mr.Garden was an old man, and the main part
of the motel where he was stating seemed unstable at first glance. He probably
needed help, since earthquakes are seldom known to strike just once, especially
one fo this magnitude. Raymond was on his way out of his room, when he heard a
knock on the door. Had the old man made
it out here that quick?He opened the door, his curiosity beating out any
other sense of logic. An old man
stood, with a lantern in one hand and a bible in the other. ´Are you alright,
Mr.Baker?´,asked the old man. He wore the strangest set of clothes Raymond had
seen in years. They looked like rugged, dirty garments of almost Victorian antiquity.
Clearly the old man was a bit out of his mind, like all the other inhabitants
of Markers Point, he had met thus far. ´Who are you?how do you know my name?’.
´It’s a small town mr.Baker, besides, my little brother tells me everything
that goes on in these cute little rooms.’´How is Mr.Garden?´,inquired Raymond.
´Sleeping, nice and soundly. Those tremors you felt, they haven’t happened
round these parts in a long time Mr. Baker. You should know that´. It was
almost as if the old man was blaming Raymond.
´I didn’t know
this place had any sort of reputation for earthquakes. I ve been coming round
these parts since I was a boy, and neverdid I hear of any eartquakes. Anyways,
do you want to come in?Its pretty cold out here in the night, and I wont be
able to sleep now, at least until im sure another one doesn’t hit.´ ´Sure.
Thank you mr. Baker, it is the Christian thing to do. Most people around these
parts have forgotten how far a little hospitality goes to a stranger. It seems
my fellow townspeople only care about themselves´. ´You can say that again. Didn’t
expect to get treated quite like I did when I arrived. Anyways, Mr. Garden, how
long has Dean owned this place?Kips doesn’t seemlike a very good place to say,
and your brother doesn’t look like the lazy type to me´. ´He isn’t. My dear
brother inherited Kips form our grandfather about 6 months ago. But Dean was
laid off his job in Baywith some time ago, and his plans for investing have
gone downhill. He has nothing more than this place.´ Both men were sitting on
the bed. The old man looked down on the ground. ´Markers Point doesn’t have a
nice history, Mr. Baker. Its out of towners like you that bring any sort of
optimism to this place, so please forgive me if Im intruding.’ ´I don’t mind at
all mr. Garden, relax. Please. ´Raymond felt bad for the old man. He could
imagine the loneliness he had to face out there every single night, especially
in the face of an earthquake. In all that darkness. ´Kips is the first stop in
your journey mr. Baker. Ill leave you to your sleep now. Im sure your daughter
is proud of you.´ The old man stood up,and headed towards the door. ´Wait!´.
Raymond Grabbed a coat he had brought from his truck. ´Here. Its cold out
there, an old man like yourself might catch something out there.´ ´Thank you´.
The old man put on the coat, and went out the door.´I am sorry, Mr.Baker, I truly
am, but it must be. Farewell.´ ´Sorry for what?´,asked Raymond. Mr. Garden the
elder, walked into the darkness,his small lantern disappearing, engulfed by the
shadows. All of this was quite bizarre. And Raymond tried to remember, in which
moment he had mentioned his daughter to Mr. Garden, any of the two. He tried to
recall ever writhing it in any of his books…. © 2012 Fernando91Author's Note
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