2nd law

Time keeps on rolling

The world constantly unfolding

Everything always unraveling

With or without you

The earth spinning closer to the sun

The sun straying towards its final blast

Books go on being written

The pages perpetually unfolding

We are ripping down all the trees

Soon enough there will be no breeze

Just to have an hour of these

Our water stays forevermore

Being polluted

More dilution

Till there's nothing left to feed

Till there's no more minds to think free

What have your seconds meant?

That time drifts on without

Anything or any one

You body aches

As it falls apart

Your heartaches fake

As your pain will stop

You whisper to yourself they shouldn't be speaking your name

Think someday they will be weeping in vein

Just as everything is about to rot

Time rolls on

It never stops

Reviews

[en skygge]

Woah! It has such a nice rythm. It gets faster and faster as you read it, and the last line is so perfect because it echoes in your brain after you read it (it's like a punch in the head). For me, it represents our obsession with time and perfection and forgetting the things that really matter. Very nicely written!

[00ZERO]

Thank you very much :)