our paths cross

lost but found - an eagles view

your dark shadow

glides 

across

the garden 

of my soul

slowly 

silently

you move

your eyes

devouring

aglow

 

your gaze

so intense

collides with mine

locked

a moment

an hour

forever

 

i see

a lifetime 

of sadness

of fear

of joy

of love

and in me

do you see anything 

less

 

the moment

lost

i will return

my eyes

upward

forever 

searching

remembering

 

teasing me

you circle and soar

soon

out of sight

abated breath

wills your return

i stand 

sad

forlorn

your mind 

made up

 

 

our paths

will cross 

again

with sadness

i watch

you glide

away

over 

the peek

riding

the wave

effortlessly

your soulmate

to seek

 

 

 

 

 

Reviews

[Garfield Rupe]

This poem is beautiful. So much love in these words,as well as sadness too. To me it speaks of some one in love but who's love is not returned as she desires it to be.
The final stanza says a lot in a few word.

our paths
will cross
again
with sadness
i watch
you glide
away over
the peak
riding
the wave
effortlessly
your soul mate
to seek

[Legacy]

Sue,

A wonderful read as sad as it is. I was soaring high in the beginning of the read and took a nose dive towards the end.

My heart goes out to you - for love is the worst pain to endure.

Thank you for a Great read

Have a wonderful day

Legacy


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[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

absolutely beautiful!