the smell of you

Just something that came to me this morning I know the word smell sounds awkward but let it be... essence is just not the right word. I rarely go back to change anything.

you come to me

in my greatest need

carrying with you 

the day 

you

you come to me

in the darkest hour

now just a memory

so wonderfully strong

just you

you come to me 

on a fresh morning breeze

and as the day eats into the hours

the memory sadly fades......

you come to me

flooding me

with new memories

the smell of you

to fill my dark and light

locked in my heart

until again......

you come to me. 

Reviews

[Eagle Cruagh]

-------It is your mind----
that creates this world---
-----Buddha

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

Absolutely beautiful. Raw and powerful emotion flows through each verse.