Wolf

Random writing, werewolf

I stepped outside bare footed, the grass hitting the tip of my feet. My foot rested onto the cold dew, like a million tears on the grass. I set my palm on the dirt. My back with scars, my soul worn. My hair draped over my face from the rain. My lips quivered. My bare body shivering. The change that was coming, i did not want. I wanted to be me. Not the monster i was about to become. My bone's were cracking all through out my body. My fingers hurt, my teeth sharpened. I heard the howls beckoning at me. The crack of leaves from the paws coming near, the fur coated horrors; what i was to become. Their teeth shown a brilliant white and their gums an awful black. I screamed at them to stay away from me, to leave me here alone. They did not listen; they seemed to smile. The gray clouds formed around me like a swarm of gray geese. Mocking me, screaming at me. The clouds formed all around me covering every inch of my skin. My muffled cries no one heard.

Author's Note

Please be nice :)

Reviews

[ladyjade]

this is a good start, and an interesting premise to a short story. I feel it should be longer though, the reader is left wondering what happens next. Keep it up though, I'd love to read more if you do decide to add to it.

Also, you don't have to take this advice but the line The gray clouds formed around me like a swarm of gray geese is beautiful, but the second "gray" is a tad unnecessary.