To The Moon

To The Moon

A Poem by Eliza-Beth

Can You Hear It

The Moon Is Calling,

Calling Ever So Softly.

And While He Calls He Sings His Song,

That Put The Stars To Sleep.

He Will Sing His Song,

Untill Every Star Blinks Out,

Finnaly The Moon Says His Goodnights,

And Melts From The Sky.

Only To Welcome Another Night.

 

© 2009 Eliza-Beth


Author's Note

Eliza-Beth
I Like The Night Time.

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All I found was some grammatical errors. Besides that, this poem is muy perfecto!lol. I really liked the ending and how it brought a surprise.

Finally the moon says its goodnights,
And melts from the sky.
Only to welcome another night.

I like the bit of suspense added to that at the last line. Great write!=]

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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All I found was some grammatical errors. Besides that, this poem is muy perfecto!lol. I really liked the ending and how it brought a surprise.

Finally the moon says its goodnights,
And melts from the sky.
Only to welcome another night.

I like the bit of suspense added to that at the last line. Great write!=]

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Eliza-Beth

Fenton, MI



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