Part of Me

I wrote this after a car followed me...that was my inspiration...strange huh?

The part of me that always felt so strong,
It's a Liar !

Wish that I'd known all along.
That part of me is human ,
Part of me's alone.
All of me is to afraid to learn
everything I've shown.

Part of me is darkness.
part of me is fear.
Part of me's alone inside.
All of me's not here.

If part of me surrenders
None of me survives
part of me lives for you
but part of me just dies.

Part of me is living
Most of me has died.
Every single breath I take
Reminds me that you lied

Every single moment
of every single day.
It just reminds me how
Nothing goes my way

Part of me is broken
Part of me's alone
But part of me still fights
and all of me has won.

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Sophie Wind]

Nice game with words
If it was me, I would leave out most of the punctuation, however
Don't ask why, it just seems right :)