...lost planet

one of my lost works from a year or so ago, i miss reading some those, especially the ones concering love, this one however i committed to memory. so here it is again.

ahhh the beauty you bring this lost soul

the glow of your waters, breaking on shores of coal

illuminating my existence, providing the light of my life

alone, lost in my head, my sanctuary from strife

nobody can see you, they will never see your sands

here time stands still, an infinite clock with no hands

my forever, my eternity, my final destination

you are mine, and you await me, with lifes procrastination

i am delayed, your shores are forever my home

you are my lost planet, mine and mine alone.

Reviews

[Puzzle-bot]

It's a great poem! I like it. the only question is, well, what is it about? that's my only question, and comment. But I realy like it. Its sort of...dreamy.