Kisses

 

Kisses are the words

You share when

Life feels out of sync,

Ebbing my emotions.

 

 

 

Author's Note

I feel like writing short stuff. =]

Reviews

[Clarisse Nanoit]

Kyle, huh? I like this. Very pretty, and SOOOOO true!
KH

[Astrid Hamilton]

"you share when life feels out of sync"

...that's what I meant...

read it, altogether, the above line.
The deeper meaning.
Purpose.
It seems as if it's supposed to be connected, and not even to make a senryu or haiku;
I already told you, it just IS.

=)

[Astrid Hamilton]

I just looked up information on the Japanese senryu form of poetry; it is similar to haiku,
except haiku of course tend to be about nature- this would be a fantastic senryu if you made it three lines- if you made the second and third lines one, it would be, in my opinion, a more connective connotation of the spirit of such emotions in the ebb and flow of life,
(always evolving) so this poem is also very zen-like; what doesn't change in the nature of true love is love itself, hence it being true, and kisses are the perfect complement with words, for words, in words.
In other words, you are beautiful! This poem IS.

p.s.
It could also be a haiku; the nature of love, of kisses, 'kisses' being the kigo,
or season word, kisses for all seasons.
(LOVE is the reason)

[Astrid Hamilton]

Me too.
Prophetic.
=)

I like the idea of kisses being words.
And words being kisses.
(especially when they're soft and tender, like this poem.)