Evening Moon to Evening Sun

 

Evening sun fades

Into Evening moon,

The clouds that drift

Daytime worries,

Now depart

Leaving careless

Stars behind.

Author's Note

I'm not good with Titles...suggestions?

And I am rather partial to that coverart of mine. What do you think of it?

Reviews

[Scott H.]

This is really nice. The sparse imagery that is used is the only imagery needed to convey the meaning most clearly. The only thing I would suggest changing is removing the comma after Now depart. Good job!