A Loaded Laugh

Hm, Had one thought...then it changed...

His words,

They echo deep

Within my core,

I grin

A goofy grin.

 

His words,

They are practiced

Like ones I've heard,

I smile

A smitten smile.

 

His words,

Are not his own,

Yet I breathe them,

And,

I laugh

A loaded laugh.

Author's Note

Hm. What do you think?

Reviews

[These Haunted Hallways]

This was pretty nice. It's hard for people these days to decipher what their partner is telling them. They dont know if they are telling the truth, or telling a lie, but in the end, they find the actual answer. That's how some relationships are, really, and then they break up. So, it is important to be and stay truthful, as well as faithful to your partner no matter how bad situations might be. And it is always good to be observant, too lol! Great Job!

[Clarisse Nanoit]

Pretty great. A goofy grin, a smitten smile, a loaded laugh. I love thinking on these things. I like the use of alliteration, as it doesn't feel forced, and it's sweet to the ears. I'll try not to post this review 8 times. tee hee. I like this one.
KH

[thecoolone52]

its different i liked how it changed every stanza... different style nice story telling