Into New Eyes

something i thought of.

 

Into New Eyes

 

Eyes fall upon two,

Each of diversity,

Bewildering loves

To one girl's heart.

 

Body within arms

Tanned and familiar,

A comfort zone

For a creature of habit.

 

She's against

The body of one,

Looking onto

A second.

 

His eyes love

Passionately,

No one else

Can top it.

 

But can she

Finally let go,

And reach for

The Unexpected?

 

Feet grounded,

Head in the clouds,

Heart in the tides;

She's unsure.

 

Where should she be?

 

Author's Note

Just had the urge to write this.

Reviews

[James K. Blaylock]

I really enjoyed reading this piece, and I'd have to say that the ending was perfect.

jkb

[Clarisse Nanoit]

Really good stuff. I love it. How can one be SO sure of a feeling? Sometimes, it's scary. Very relatable (sp?) and very sweet. Another amazing one!!
KH

[Brandon]

I thought you did a nice job on this one. Well written.