Accidently Kristen's

Just a little poem...I wrote last year.

Kaleidoscopes of hopes and dreams,
Ripping her apart at the seams,
Itching their way to her soul,
Sternly probing her heart,
Tattering all faith in
Eternal love and peace,
Nothing is right

Author's Note

=] thought i'd post it.

I found it foaming at the mouth. I'm open to suggestions for the cover art. =]

Reviews

[Clarisse Nanoit]

As I have already told you, I adore the trickery of the first two lines' rhyming. :) It gets the reader into this rhythm and then kinda helps the read the poem as I feel it was intended to be read. Whether or not this was intentional, congratulations on achieving it!! ;P Fantastic imagery. Just a great poem.
KH
P.S. Fellow readers, this poem is an accidental acrostic of MY name. That's right. BE JEALOUS.