An Unbreakable PACKt

This is a collections of poems. Right now, one is missing...

 

Pacing peacefully,

Along the path,

Collecting hearts that

Kindred souls protect.

 

Precious shells

And rolling waves

Capture her heart

In a peaceful trance,

Filling her soul with

Indescribable ambitions,

Collecting fragments of

Alienated lives.

 

An aurora of colors

Rise to the heavens

In deep luscious colors;

All surrounds the sky with

New emotions of joy and wisdom,

Nothing but love lingers

Aimlessly from the cerulean beauty.

 

Cute and sweet, cruising through a store,

Airy and light, attentively wandering,

Little do they know she's looking for the one,

Little do they see the true beauty behind the brands,

Each perfection blooming

Inside this one of a kind princess,

Glistening with love so

High and mighty that the gods are jealous.

 

 

Keys of every shape and size,

Rest in front of everyone's eyes;

 

Itching deep beneath my skin,

Seconds tick before someone's in;

 

Twisting, turning that heart-shaped key,

I find this love inside of me;

 

Nursing all my pathetic cries.

Author's Note

Let me know what you think, but please don't state the obvious.

And its five separate poems.

Reviews

[Clarisse Nanoit]

P.S. I just noticed the "PACKt" thing. FANTASTIC! :)
KH

[Clarisse Nanoit]

LOVE THIS! My favorite line, I think, is
"Glistening with love so
High and mighty that the gods are jealous."
How great is that? I think you should edit the author's note, now, since I've seen it, and that's all that matters. :P LURVE the colors and then the switching from side to side thing. It gives a very nice effect to the poem. The fonts are inconsistent, but since you know that and can't fix it, I won't mention (oops, too late). I have had that trouble so many times on this site, I wouldn't even know how many times!! I'm moving on to read your other new ones! Thanks for the headsup on your new (and surely wonderful) additions!!
KH