I Am A Dog

on my knees

 

a nasty dirty dog with no voice of its own

(you speak for me, there's really no need anymore)

 

a nasty dirty horny dog

base and vile

lapping up spilt dreams

 

you appear to be strong

but master you are weak

and I am running away.

 

 

Reviews

[El Cu Cuy]

wow. This is a very integrated piece. It's full of spirit and imagination. I think that this would be great for a central piece, but that's the beauty of writing. You can have it ANY way you want. Have fun now.

[mcnally]

very good. lot's of emotion. love reading it. thanks for sharing!

[The Mad Prophet]

Wow, I like this one alot. You use metaphor showing how you don't have a lot of control in your relationship. Nether does the master.. Neat little balance to it.

[Legion]

Break that chain. What symbolism here. Great work for such a short piece. Much to say (or growl) here.