Mountain Dew & Gatorade

Mountain Dew & Gatorade

A Poem by .mate.feed.kill.repeat.

 

your sweet Gatorade
[fruit punch]
lips clash
with my venomous Mountain Dew
[lemon lime]
tongue

 

thus procuring the statement
“Mountain Dew and Gatorade do not mix.”

 

a/n[[stix+dev-->♥forever]]

© 2008 .mate.feed.kill.repeat.


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Interesting clash, the bad ying-yang feel, using Gatorade & Montain Dew as symbols of bad mixing. I like the idea a lot. It is also open for interpretation in some ways.

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.mate.feed.kill.repeat.
.mate.feed.kill.repeat.

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I have written over 400 poems and short stories. I post almost all of them directly to my profile on FictionPress. http://www.fictionpress.com/~matefeedkillrepeat I rarely update this thing. Hon.. more..

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