Vampyre

Vampyre

A Poem by .mate.feed.kill.repeat.

darkness.
alone.
silent.

As I listen to the ringing in my ears, I remember you do not know my pain; you do not understand my sorrow

 

Death.
Is all around you.
You can't escape it.
Why do you so desperately run?
Decay.
Your body breaking down.
Losing physical form.
You can't fight it; Death always wins.
Blood.
Drink it.
You are escaping death.
Tell yourself your lies and leave me to rest.
You're not escaping anything.
Give in.
Give up.
Give life.

© 2008 .mate.feed.kill.repeat.


Author's Note

.mate.feed.kill.repeat.
one of the oldest poems I've ever written

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Rather dark and to the point ,to be sure, a well crafted piece

very well expressed~ Thanks for sharing in I AN VAMPIRE~

Posted 15 Years Ago


Wow, this is such a cool poem. Amazingly written and I just love it. Awesome job!!!

Heather

Posted 16 Years Ago


I like it... it really is a good piece I loved how you said so much in so little of words... it just seemed to jump off the page at parts... I especially loved the ending....

"Give in.
Give up.
Give life." just made the poem for me in a way... great job!

Posted 16 Years Ago



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Added on June 5, 2008

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I have written over 400 poems and short stories. I post almost all of them directly to my profile on FictionPress. http://www.fictionpress.com/~matefeedkillrepeat I rarely update this thing. Hon.. more..

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