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A Poem by .mate.feed.kill.repeat.
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need to, but can't.

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need to talk about this
but can’t.

 

need to explain this
but can’t.

 

need to find someone
but can’t.

 

need to let this go
but can’t.

 

need to bleed
{but shouldn’t}

 

need to cry
but can’t.

 

need to scream at her
but can’t.

 

need to stop myself
but can’t.

 

need to end this.

© 2008 .mate.feed.kill.repeat.


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But can't.
I like the repetitiveness. I sometimes do that with my own work. Anyway, great job on this poem. I like it.

Posted 16 Years Ago


Yes, this is very powerful and profound. It has a darkness to it. I need to...add this to my favorites

Posted 16 Years Ago


A simple yet very powerful poem, a lot of people including myselft have felt this way or a similar way at one point in time.
laceyjane

Posted 16 Years Ago



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I have written over 400 poems and short stories. I post almost all of them directly to my profile on FictionPress. http://www.fictionpress.com/~matefeedkillrepeat I rarely update this thing. Hon.. more..

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