Breaking Teeth

This is a freestyle poem I wrote when I was formerly dating a guy who I could just never figure out. I do believe this was during a fight we had, and by the sounds of it, probably.

 

Unweave

Like a high tide, crash long the eyelids

Red, like my begging

Or not so much

But to distill time, like kaleidoscope eyes

Or to break away from the clock

As it melts

Dripping

They’re not tears of sorrow

Sorrow doesn’t subsist

Trickling lone, it be

And ponder up the will to show emotion?

I doubt it comes from you yet

For I see black, and I see white

Colour is just a phase

The truth lies in the monotone facts

You

Me

We die a lot, but that’s alright

Reincarnate, sweet bee

Suck the nectar dry from a new flower

Embrace what you’ve got ‘til the bud melts

Will your web prosper?

Maybe so, and for the likes of you, maybe

But for I, lies a tongue, or a way, per say

Drizzling

Like honey from your mouth

What do you crawl as?

I must see you

I must become you

In mind, body, and blood

I’ll fight for you, die for you, live for you

I’ll spin into a loss of words and such

But to cross amends with breaking teeth

There will be only I, choke

And die

Author's Note

I want opinions of all sorts, and more preferably, what you actually think and feel when you read this.

Reviews

[C K.]

Jesus...I'm not really sure what I'm thinking when I read this, but I love it :) total awe.

"We die a lot but that's alright"

Genius. Ckx