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The beauty of our Mother Earth

Forced into shadows, made to hide

Tell me now, what was her worth

When alone, in darkness, she died

Author's Note

Quick poem written in my writing class yesterday. We were given a piece of music to listen to (look for mood, atmosphere, etc...) and to write a small poem based on what we felt it was about. This is what I came up with.
Enjoy

Reviews

[Periac]

BAM!

you just to the reader on a very fine moral train wreck and i’m left applauding

brilliant

[TC Dunn]

wow… so sad… oh makes you really think about what we're doing to nature. Beautifully constructed and wonderful message.

[Tate Morgan]

maybe Terra would be more appropriate fior the title

[Coyote Poetry]

A strong poem. I would use the words "Mother Earth" as the title. You said a lot of truth in this short poem. A strong ending to a excellent poem.
Coyote