My Heart

Dedicated to someone special...

I'll patch it with duct tape

I'll glue it with glue

I'll cover it with band-aids

I'll stitch it up to

I'll patch it up nicely

With fabrics all different kinds

But remember it can only be

Fixed so many times...

Author's Note

So, this is an old - last year kind of old - poem that I wrote for someone I care about with all my heart. Thanks for ignoring it..
But thank you for ignoring it long enough for me to almost have moved on

Reviews

[serpent]

ahann!! now that's what i call short, smooth and powerful!..
love has some gray shades to it... it never holds itself back from showing us those gray phases the we perhaps forget about when in love...this write reeks out a lot of love and emotions for the person it has been penned for...at the same time it conveys a message of expectiaton(s) by the writer.
the author's note says it all..and i guess this is why this particual write of yours is outstanding...its just pure, raw emotions coming out...nothing more..nothing less.

well done!

[Angie Diane♥&hea..]

This was a really powerful write. I loved this. I feel like this sometimes...you know I do...you've talked to me a lot...and I love the message. Good write. Thanks for sharing.

[JC]

ha, i dig your authours note..poetry in itself..poem was very lyrical...could make a good song..

[Silvario]

very cute :)
a powerful messege in a small yet very effective package.

nicely done :)

[Mauricio Montoya]

how many time can one mend a heart, the sad thing is the other side doesn't see that part. this piece said a lot for being so short. Excellent write.

[Adam :P]

aw i like this suprisingly it has no views very good poem.