What Colorful Lives

Thi poem makes me feel all fuzzy inside! Gah!

 

What Colorful Lives

 

She told me write in color

Let a rainbow spill on each page

My emotions in all different hues

Each referring to a different phase

My notebook soon became drenched in hues

Though red and yellow were foreseen at the end

My beginning filled with those of blacks and blues

Memories in need of a helping hand

Author's Note

I personally love this poem, out of all the poems I've wrote this is definetly my favorite! I hope its the same for you :)

Reviews

[Dhaye]

Ah, yes. I also love colors. I associate them with my mood each day.

When I am happy then I would choose yellow
When I am sad, it could be black or deep blue
When I am angry, let me choose red
When I feel jealous, see me in green.

Nicely penned, Rachael. :)

[jacob erin-cilberto]

and maybe you found, as most poets do...the blues were easier to write...and that color dominated...usually does for me...even though i am quite the contented and most often happy person....it is easier to write "blue"--

very nice piece here.

jacob

[Rachael]

So true, the sadness in life is so much easier to portray because we know exactly what we feel inside. Happyness is a bit more hard to explain, yet we thrive to know what will make us happy.

Thanks for the reveiw, I really appreciated it. :)

[zainul]

Awesome work.
Impressed by your colorful presentation of 'rainbow'.
This is amazing.

[MoriartyMesa]

Not too be too much of a scumbag, but you need to do a wee bit more grammar. I enjoyed the over all feeling and emotion, but i think you have more in your own power than you know. Liked this Stolie and OJ on me.



cheers.

[Chris Dominguez]

I like the colors involved and how u show the emotion coming from the colors within themselves separately. Nice job :)

[revalatia]

and what a beautiful canvas it makes :)

[Rachael]

Indeed. ;)

[Honeycomb]

I love all colors! And the rainbow in your poem was adorable!

[Issac Scott]

I really liked this. Great read.

[Rachael]

Thanks! :)

[SyberRose]

I enjoyed your words...there is a contest about colors you might want to enter under the contest section...SyberRose