This ones for you.

I tried harder, harder harder harder
To pump blood faster, faster faster faster
It's not as easy, as it seems.
I tried harder, harder harder harder
To go faster, faster faster faster
Try hard not to be seen.
Darling, try to see the spotlight
One tragic error in the moonlight
That illuminates one face, one heart break.
Swim faster, faster faster faster
Before you call shark
Call wolf
Behind my back
Sends me flying, over the edge.
You're not just one, one person in the world
You're mine
The red balloon I let fly
Take my hand, and we'll fly together.
And I'll wear the polo and you'll wear the sweater
And we'll be the kings and queens of the better
No doubt we'll keep singing this song to you.

Author's Note

I know my writing has been...out of order? But I'm not much for order any more I guess, so try not to comment on so much that you noticed it (if you didn't that's cool), but if you did, is it not appealing?

Reviews

[Preston]

I really loved this. It makes sense even though the context is unusual. You always write the best poems, damn it!

[Elissa; the genuine art..]

I really like this write.
I don't feel that any of it was forced, in fact it all flowed perfectly.
I found this piece extremely alluring and well-manufactured.
Keep up the great work!

-Elissa :D

[la Abeja]

I like the rhythm and flow of this poem. Great write. I was, though, a little confused by the line "And I'll wear the polo and you'll wear the sweater" It almost sounds like you were looking too hard for a rhyme.
But that's ok. I really did like this poem. Keep it up!