I'm just a simpleton.

I haven't written in awhile and I took out my keyboard tonight and this came out. I came up with another one as well but I didn't write it down, so now I'm angry with myself.

It took me a long time to realize
That we're all masters at our disguise
And these weathered sails will soon realize
And take me across a giant lake called the ocean
And it took me not too long, to realize
That we are play toys in a plastic house
And quite frankly I'm tired of being toyed with
Why do only some of the colors get to run on the rainbows long spine
I hate how it teaches us to wipe out all the rest
I'm just, a simpleton
And you're a small, pedestrian
So we'll fall in love
I almost hit you with my car
But we're Seattleits
So you go
No you, can, go.

Author's Note

Incredibly random, I know. My poetry isn't too structured anymore. I just like the sentences, quite frankly. But I'd love everyone's opinion.

Reviews

[nostal]

Quirky.
You have some amazing lines in here.

[Elissa; the genuine art..]

"I'm just, a simpleton
And you're a small, pedestrian
So we'll fall in love
I almost hit you with my car
But we're Seattleits
So you go
No you, can, go."

That part was so beautiful!
It really grabbed me.
I like your style.

-Elissa :)

[Preston]

i really loved this peice zoe :3 it didn't make sense but it was very beautiful