Afternoon Summer Time.

Over the summer I came up with a new way to write poetry. This is my new form. A comment on it said that it was like a story made up of just the intricate details, like the plot was cut out. Observations.

Silent falling leaves- crisp leaves

30 minutes load and unload

Fire design

Dead grass

Sleep

Room with no windows or doors: dark- No escape

Crystal fountain- Diamond water- Shiny droplets

Bridge- Skyscrapers- Arch/ black arch/ dead arch/ stone arch

Druggies

Dying oak

Old maple- blood

Newborn tree

Fading/ flickering light/ lamp/ candle

Alleyway

Lonely/ alone/ bench

Crows- Vicious

Stairs- girl on stairs- holding dandelion/ yellow/ red/ green

Empty swing set

Weeds

Cigarette butt- coughs

Crumpled flowers/ plants/ leaves/ nature

Lamp post- cracked/ Narnia

Stagnant water/ fountain

Wading pool

Stone building/ one/ two/ three/ four?

Fountain- Waterfall

Drift- drifting

Drink/ alcohol/ diet cola

Heavy dose of happiness/ smiles/ laughter

Reflection- soft

Breeze- cold/ warm

Garden full of gardens

Musician- eerie/ hypnotizing

Taste- smoke/ the blue sky/ atmosphere

Rocks- steps of water

Somebody dies in this line

This line references to George Bush

This line is a philosophical statement about a Chinese lamp

Must put in the color roasted orange

This line features a famous celebrity eating a sandwich

I ate a crayon and it tasted like blueberries!

Mannequin life

Oh my gosh!

Relationship problems

Orb lamp post- rounded

Blue/ gray/ white/ checkered wall

Begin

Arterial routes

Pink/ brown hair in lots of braids with beads

Telephone booth-blue/ red

Upside down bottom

Half of a mannequin

Showing off skinny jeans and socks

Old woman dressed punk

Broken mannequins- fixed with band aids

Crazy purple hair

Blue Jay bird sings

Yellow house- the pee house

Broken shed doors

Really green grass that looks artificial

Big house

Bigger house

An even bigger tree

Half rock half soil walkway

Blue straw in the street

Sidewalk outlined in piles of leaves- to find your way

Bright beautiful flowers in the middle of ugly plants

Face shaped rock

Chinese parade

Indian belly dancing

Dragons

Fire

Indians

Dancing

Ice

Evil

Angels

Devils

Incense- actually pot

Foreign

A scary movie

10,000 BC

Glow- light

Hello!

Tarzan- George of the Jungle

Blindness

Butterflies-patterned

Empty eyes

My echo- yours

Fear

Celebration

“Sylvia”

My prayer

Author's Note

I'd like to know your thoughts on the new style. I found this in my notebook from Hugo House of just observations from walking around, and I decided to make it into a poem.