Broken

I am an angel with broken wings

eveytime something happens that is wrong,

a feather of the beautiful, white wing gets ripped off

like my heart, it is ripped out every second of my life

and soon I will be dead.

Like an angel with broken wings,

soon those wings will be gone

and won't be an angel anymore.

My heart is like an angel with broken wings,

the angel becomes as empty as my heart is

and it'd be an ugly sight.

Hoping someone would come and rebuild those broken wings,

and until then, I still need someone to

mend my broken heart.

Reviews

[Vee]

Aw Anna i liked it! its cute and sad all at the same time!

[Mr. Lopez]

Know that angels were meant to fly and life will bring much joy and heartache. Your heart will heal and your soul will grow. I know that this is supposed to be a review of your work , not your life :) .Is'nt it funny how when a writer opens up their heart the words just seem to fall out of our heads? Your poem is very heart felt and well worded. You capture the emotion of heartache for the reader to try on ,if only for a moment. Very well done ....and yes , you will fly again.

[thecoolone52]

ohhh a heartbreak angel poemmm... you know i liked it reminds me ofalot of things... nice work