The Sun's Spotlight is Stolen

Who took it? {Inspired by Moon Faker, by Poetic Justice}

"WHO took my spotlight?!" The Sun screamed,

his anger blazed, 

his eyes fiercely gleamed.

The other stars gasped, not knowing what to say,

"We do not know who took it away!"

Venus, the hottest planet, giggled with glee,

"I know who it is! But, it wasn't me!"

All the planets confessed, not having a clue,

all but one, the Sun's sister Moon.

The Sun turned on her, his fiery eyes slits,

"Where's my spotlight, sister? Did you take it?"

The Moon blushed, turning a light but distinct red,

then, coughing, she quietly said,

"Yes, I took it, but do you know why?

So I may brighten the night's black sky."

The Sun looked at his beautiful sister,

then grinned, and sweetly kissed her

Laughing he said, his heart suddenly light,

"You deserve to rule the night."

Reviews

[sarah]

This is wonderful and really well written

[Vanesa Markovic]

This is wonderful, really truly wonderful!
A gorgeous idea, very well executed.
Loved it!

[Josephine]

awww I love it! so creative, and I love the way it flows, ur very talented!

[nono]

Nice job K always happy to read your work lol I just wrote a poem with diolouge. Most people don't do that, but I think it's very interesting with people do do it. I like it!
"The Sun screamed"
Amazing part keep it up!

[Aven]

a wonderful piece :)

[Zeitgeist Manifesto]

I love this Folklore.
This story Rawks...

[No use.]

awwwwwwwwwww, if it were only that sweet more often

[MichaelsLyric.com]

This made me smile. It's just so sweet. Thank you for writing this : )

[JanieB]

Real sweet.

[Marie Harrison]

Very charming poem indeed. Loved it! Thanks for sharing. Nice to meet you too.