The First

To plelitte, the first to encourage me to keep writing on here. To my family, to say, "You are so talented." And to My Writing Obsession for introducing me.

The first.

YOU were the first to say, "Keep going."

And, "You're great!"

YOU were the first apple off the tree, 

the first leaf to fall.

But you were also last.

The last I will forget.

The last to never say, "This isn't good."

Or, "I hate this."

You were the first.

Reviews

[Walter Scott Morrison]

She has been so kind to many of us. Good work

[Ruth]

The first is always memorable :)
A great dedication
Great poem
xx

[David W Moore III]

inspiration comes in many forms, and when it's a person it can be quite a driving force as we try to live up to the standard that is recognized in us. it is quite elevating. nice work

This makes me think of me and my daughter.

[luciddreamer]

Heartfelt writing....good job :)
Peace
Robin

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well of course I am going to say to was fantastic!!!! LOL Your words are touching and humble and you write from a place where only the truth comes..your heart..yes you better keeping writing!!! Loved it :))))))))