The First

To plelitte, the first to encourage me to keep writing on here. To my family, to say, "You are so talented." And to My Writing Obsession for introducing me.

The first.

YOU were the first to say, "Keep going."

And, "You're great!"

YOU were the first apple off the tree, 

the first leaf to fall.

But you were also last.

The last I will forget.

The last to never say, "This isn't good."

Or, "I hate this."

You were the first.

Reviews

[KL]

Dedication at its finest - short and sweet. I would be flattered if I was plelitte. That just rhymed, I didn't know, until I typed it out to show!

[JelliFyshKissUs]

Aw... what an appreciate poem. Plelitte's heart must be bursting at the seams. Lovely and inspirational, my dear.

[loowzerX]

haha how sweet! very cool poem :)

[Kes]

this is so uplifting! I love people who tell me i'm talented! lol I sing as well as write, and i play guitar and i love the wonderful people who encourage me.
Beautiful!

[Jeff Bresee]

Very interesting. Short poems always have the best punch.

[Charles]

Plelitte also did this for me, she inroduced me to this great place and I can relate to your appreciation.

[Broken Girl]

Ahhh. That's sweet! (:

[Jas Alejandrino Ramos]

what a cute poem...it is simple but makes sense from the heart of those who read this..and it is the sense that there is still love that loves people and not just hurt

[nono]

How kind! The positivity of oneself sometimes turns into something that's so negative! You did a nice job writing this!

[Brad]

a wonderful ode to a wonderful writer and friend