Can You Love This Scolded Angel?

That Feeling Of worthlessness

Can You Love This Scolded Angel?

I have so many flaws my wings are ash,

tears are like burning sulphur
back scarred by the lash,

I was once your faithful servant

willing only to please,

do you want me to beg?

here I'm on my knees,
the smile upon your face

show that this does please.

"Stand you cheat"   
you lost your chance with he,

"we had our future together before you cuckold me"
you were my angel my one in a million

Now your nothing a mere civilian.

please forgive me it was a mistake

arms reaching out skinny as a rake,

"Keep your touch away from my skin"

she observes the hatred he holds within

please forgive me feel my gentle kiss, 

standing and leaning forward 

he moves to make her miss.

"Your dead to me now leave my sight"

knowing full well she won't survive the night
he hands her a razor blade a smile on his face

vermilion soon drips upon the white lace, 

The angel becomes weak stares lovingly into his eyes

he stares back and forgives all her lies.

"Can you tell me you love me?"
a single word does flow

she was a scolded angel 
his answer was "No"

 

Author's Note

Tried Something A little different with this one hope you like it?

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Thank you for reading

Reviews

[((Teenage_Poet_Loser))]

u have so much more talent than i could dream of having =]

[Kes]

Whoo! I love the last stanza.
Touches a nerve. Nice work.