Shoe Lust

My personnel obsession explained

Shoe Lust  

A multitude of Colours
Fabric so divine
That pair that captivate
Simply by design
Leather, cotton, plastic, elastic
Simply fantastic
My jaw drops as shops restock
New season new trend
My foots best friend
Laces, straps both perhaps
The perfect shoe to finish a suit
Wouldn’t be appropriate to wear a boot

Money not an issue to fulfil this lust
Something that protects my feet
How can you not trust

Not talking about boots or sandals either
Talking of those shoes my hearts deceiver
Fabric cant protect my toes
But the design is enough
Dullness to a leather shoe
Only needs a buff  

Such variety I can’t possibly possess them all
But their designs and comfort
Never fail to enthrall
 
Their sturdy nature flat or round
Down to earth, help me to caress the ground
No matter which brand
The price
Or the shop
To miss out on this pair
My addiction won’t stop
Protect my soul
I will not heel
This lust for shoes
Is only to real

Author's Note

Please give honest reviews as always

and why not tell me about your favourite pair :)

Reviews

[Becky Lawrence]

this poem flows so nicely, it's easy to read yet not simple... hard to explain, but great nonetheless. If I had the money, I'd buy all the shoes I ever wanted so I really get this poem haha
Favorite pair... my DVS hightops in pastel colors. They were so comfortable but I wore through the bottoms :(

[trainwreck]

This was awesome! my favorite pair is a beat up pair of volcom shoes. they're so trashed, I love it.

[Dilan Gray]

I thought this poem was fun and you had a lot of great word choice. Great job, as always!

[Samantha ~virginpoet]

I love shoes and I loved this poem very fun read. my fave pair... I cant choose just one pair lol Ill add a few pics of them

[Quinn Blackburn]

Delightful and highly relevant to many consumers :o) Minor editing note, last line "to" instead of "too". Other than that, soleful perfection ;o) My favorite pair? a pair of calf-high black and purple buffalo leather handmade renaissance boots with built in arch supports. I literally loved them to death over ten years. they were like wearing comfy socks with great support! I could wear them in and out of rivers, climb up cliffs, and sleep in them. :o)

[northern monkey]

Great fun. Witty and wordly-wise.

[Stef Outsiders]

Shoes, god if only!.. lol Everyone has there desires, hobbies and passions... and normal as it sounds its your... shoes! great poem!!

[Kat24]

Hi,
this is really good. really interesting. Kat24

[Kiri Nells]

Fun and lighthearted. It ran so smoothly without any kinks! Another great one! Oh, and I'm a converse lover.