Why Whisper?

A poem Describing hurtful whispers

Why Whisper?

Being victim to such cruel stares
Eyes piercing the skin
jousting against my heart
Tearing me from within
 ripping me apart
Twisted and tormented
their lashing tongues
Twisting, tearing, thrusting
 whilst trusting
Each and every evil eventful lie
 envious from the start

Speak to me whilst splitting the truth
 S p I t t I n g
Your secretive vices

Why whisper when all you say
is all that has never been said

Author's Note

Something Different hope you like?

please give honest reviews as always

Reviews

[Winters_Lost_Walk]

People can hurt one's feelings so easily, i went through this, it's like its not enough having to go through the guilt of your mistake, you have to hear people spit venom against you. Giving you a harder time, looking at you as if you're the only bad thing, when at the time you need them more..
I really enjoyed reading this =)

[Dilan Gray]

I loved the word choice in this poem, it really added to the images and what you were saying. I really liked it. Great job.

[Stef Outsiders]

it is certainly different but its is still an amazing talent! Whispers can be cruel...

[Dream Weaver]

Whispers that turn into ridiculed travasties
are never a pleasant thing. A very good write
indeed...

[Chris Smith Welshpoetcs]

I did like it, hidden whispers can hurt and I have been a victim of those whispers. I related so well to this.

[northern monkey]

Another well-written, uncomfortable read. Tend to agree with aprilynnette and Quinn Blackburn on this one - we can't allow others' negativity to undermine our energy for fulfilment or being a positive influence in the world.

[howlfjdks]

If you take in the feed of another's negativity, believing it, you lose for the true gold in the world is energy/love. If a person cannot create their own, they steal it from another, if you give in.

[Grace Catherine C.]

I really like this one, very good job!

[Kat24]

hi,
very interesting. Kat24

[Short.Nerd]

Very good. Keep up the good work!

[HopelesslyDevoted]

different but outrageously good!