Poor Little Rag Doll

This is interesting prose work for poetry. I think this would make a remarkable series. The doll, entering into the living, to tell the horrid tale, of all that she had seen. Quite impressive.. Very origional and very very intriquiging, You should make this poem a preface, and re-order it as a book. Each chapter can be in poetic form telling this sad tale from begining to end.. Wonderful creation. 100/100 for the idea alon, and a 100/100 for the technical its really a 200/100 in my oppinion, but they won't let me go higher than 100. Let me know if you pursue this as a book of prose poetry so I can add it to my reading list. Thank you

Posted 13 Years Ago

I want to read more of this! I like it. This was a very intense poem.

Posted 13 Years Ago

Very creepy. But I loved it! I have a fascination with dolls and always wondered what they would be like if they could really come to life. This poem definitely answered those questions. Nicely done.

Posted 13 Years Ago

This is really good. I like it, bundles.

Posted 13 Years Ago

This is great! Equal parts melancholy and creepy...I'm all for creepy and always love a good twist. I vote for a series.

Posted 13 Years Ago

Amazing! You do not cease to amaze me! I love the life you brought to the doll when you took us all to her eyes. Outstanding. It touched so many parts of my life, in so many ways.

Posted 13 Years Ago

yes i want to know the secrets,
this is an awesome story...

Posted 13 Years Ago

Amazing. A well written piece. I would love to find out the rest of this doll's secrets.

Posted 13 Years Ago

So many possibilities! I love tales that focus on an object and unfold all that it has witnessed. This is especially effective with something as evocative as a doll. Well crafted poetry here, presents a clear image and mood, and definitely peaks interest. Certainly curious to see where you take us with this doll's story. excellent work!

Posted 13 Years Ago

So descriptive and interesting. I love this poem. I enjoyed reading it. :)

Posted 13 Years Ago

I want to know the secret. Can't wait to find out more. Once again I live images and the word choice. You wrote this beautifully. Great little story that leaves me wanting to know more. Great poem.

Posted 13 Years Ago