The Alleyway

once again pushing the barriers writing what people avoid

The Ally

Demonic pathways demanding lust

lonely walker breaking trust

buying drinks all to subdue

Rohypnol added or a few

I saw her teasing, dancing all night

gazing at me, frivolous spite

now the upper hand is mine 

spiked drink take your swigs of wine

Following you home the darkest of night

no people to accompany you to my delight

run up behind a found hammer in hand

blow to your head over your body I stand

undress you while your dazed and confused

your frail little body ready to be abused

“tease me will you , seduce me all night

c**k teasing w***e you will remember tonight”

slowly coming round she screams in my face

constrict her breathing her arms all over the place

deeper and deeper I feel myself drawing near

The look in her eyes of pain and fear

reach my climax above her I now stand

“please” she begs reaching out her hand

I pull out a knife once hidden from view

press its cold metal to her throat

“you won’t say a word if you know what’s good for you”

leaving her crying in pain and alone

This dark alleyway she sits an unemotional drone 

Author's Note

Another poem that rarely uses the subject matter I have embraced
Again I know its a hard poem to read but if you get through it I appreciate your feedback

thank you for reading And sorry in advance if anyone has suffered from this abuse

Reviews

[Shelby]

Dark and appropriately ugly. This is such a sensitive subject, but you capture the need of the rapist to overpower their quarry vey well. I don't know if this is a compliment in the traditional sense, but you enter the mind of your subject and create a believable circumstance and I was impressed at how you portrayed these two people in such a realistic, honest light. As a storyteller, you are a master, and I'm glad to see you don't really feel this way, because I liked that you told it from the viewpoint of the monster, and did it well. It was dark and an uncomfortable subject matter for most people, but you did it with just the right amount of restraint, never straying toofar over the line and keeping a respectful distance from describing the gritty details unnecessarily. Some people drown their dark poem in overwhelming details that can make things uncomfortably real, but youdrew a line between art and perversity. Well done and thank you for sharing.

[Dilan Gray]

The images in this poem were really clear, I could imagine the entire story. You wrote it so well. You have a knack for taking topics that people avoid and writing an amazing poem out of it. That is fantastic! I really liked this poem. Great job!

[Stef Outsiders]

WOW, that was really dark! But loved how you caught the twisted mind of man who would do such a thing... Like you've said its all about pushes boundaries and you have succeeded that... awesome! Your dark mind amazes me... LOL

[J.M]

Controversial topic, but you handled it extremely well. Creating dramatic imagery and expressing the two viewpoints very well.

[Michael.]

Good shock value.
The flow was consistent and more than just a few good lines.