Secrets (I want to understand)

Secrets (I want to understand)

A Poem by {A}shley {B}lack @-;-
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A poem About finding out your girlfriend is pregnant

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Secrets, (I want to Understand)
Why do you keep these secrets 
I want to understand
only wanting to be there
I want to hold your hand
if what your sharing is the truth
I won’t just walk away 
I will raise it as my own 
There is nothing else to say
I don’t mind that it’s not mine
but why try to push me back
being hurtful like in your eyes
there’s emotion I lack
do you think I care
what happened before we met
I just want to be there for you
losing me you would regret
I will be there every moment
every scan you attend
I will make sure you never struggle
all my money I will send
look at me please don’t be sad
because at the end of this
We will be together and I will be a dad
But if that’s not what you want 
and you push me away
I hope you don’t blame anyone
when you struggle day by day

© 2011 {A}shley {B}lack @-;-


Author's Note

{A}shley {B}lack @-;-
Sometimes people protect the ones they love by holding secrets they fear will end their love well there are good people out there

Please be honest with your reviews as always

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Aww I love this... It shows how caring, understanding you are and you just simply want to be there, no matter what the situation let be... I understand how that young girl felt as well, it's hard when you love someone and the baby might not be there's, your automatic reaction is to push them away and blind themselves from everything...
it's true there are good people out there, at one point I thought they never existed, I guess... I was wrong about that...
Another amazingly written poem!!

Posted 13 Years Ago


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wonderful (:

Posted 13 Years Ago


0 of 3 people found this review constructive.

ok i loved it

Posted 13 Years Ago


0 of 3 people found this review constructive.

I like this poem a lot. I love the word choice and all the images, it is a very sweet poem! Great job!

Posted 13 Years Ago


Emotional write here, so well written and expressed.

Posted 13 Years Ago


Aww I love this... It shows how caring, understanding you are and you just simply want to be there, no matter what the situation let be... I understand how that young girl felt as well, it's hard when you love someone and the baby might not be there's, your automatic reaction is to push them away and blind themselves from everything...
it's true there are good people out there, at one point I thought they never existed, I guess... I was wrong about that...
Another amazingly written poem!!

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

oh this was was very poignant...it moved me..so many emotions...well expressed..

Posted 13 Years Ago


Great poem and very emotional piece.... It almost had me in tears... The loning for some form of connection is astonishing! a 100/100 for sure

Posted 13 Years Ago


0 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Great as always! Self sacrifice to accept an unborn child as your own takes a true man.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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{A}shley {B}lack @-;-
{A}shley {B}lack @-;-

Sheriffhales, Shropshire , United Kingdom



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I Am Ashley Black (an alter ego ) I have a dark mind when it comes to my poetry as the strongest emotions come from negative RETURNING- I have been distant from this site for a while but I am fina.. more..

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